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1 i can not afford anything cost much 改為 i can not afford to buy anything cost much。cuz afford means having the fanancial to do something or to buy something.6 ~3 h+ N4 P5 F3 z5 K& r$ p, @
2.by the end of the last December. by the end 是固定搭配 。
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3.i got the problem again.用 get 或者 have 都行。
9 j, }$ c7 `, |4.by the end of the last December , i got the problem again ,but i am not such someone being afraid of figuring out a crazy idea.沒太看懂這句您想表達什么。( S$ X3 q$ u' y
第一段大概就這些小細節 ,您寫得很不錯 對于初學者來說,孰能生巧加油,另外 在英翻界有句話 就是十句漢譯英才能出來一句英譯漢 也就是多精讀 多翻譯 才能糾正中式思維。一點小建議,共勉。 |
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